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Ohh surprise story drop. (well at least I hadn't expected it this year any more)
Liked what you did to it.
Loved how you applied what latex/fetish could be applied in this setting without completely ruining the suspension of disbelieve
Also the story there is really good. it drew me in and helps spread the sense of hopelessness/loss of power.
I had sort of expected this part to be a bit glossed over but I feel you really maximized it with both <no spoilers> and <no spoilers> playing such an active role.
Also the final burning of bridges sets such an excellent stage
Thnx, going to re read this quite a few times I think
(updated post to better reflect the emotions I was trying to articulate)
Because I can never find the right location in the forum to leave praise without the risk of spoiling the story for other readers, hope this is all right.
It took me a few reads to put my finger on it but I think it’s the way you depict the power dynamic and Vicky’s ever deepening sense of her loss of it.
The scene in the cafeteria leading to the night with the other inmates and subsequently the other guards was a good starter.
I found the telephone scene after however truly inspired. Handing her back her purse and using that as a vehicle for her to be forced to wear humiliating clothes sets that scene perfectly.
The two dynamics occurring simultaneously after that though are my favorite of the comic:
- Emily repeatedly calling him Master, implicitly conveying just how far along her training has progressed.
- Ladonna forcing Vicky to admit that seeing Emily being manhandle turned her on, denying Vicky even the privacy of her darkest thoughts and emotions.
Both are excellent by themselves but the way the two are integrated makes this my favorite scene. Odd given how low on fetish it is compared to the next one but it is.
That’s not to say that the next one isn’t also great, IMHO at least.
First forcing Vicky to witness just how badly she’s failed Brenda and the other girls whilst experiencing it herself. Then, using the up of being “rescued” as a setup for such a dramatic fall. It really appealed to both my fetish for latex and powerplay. (I think technically not one scene but it felt like a whole to me)
Finally, the way she extricates herself and takes the plane is also a cool. By not being whisked away but instead giving her some degree of degree of initiative she becomes complacent in what ever happens to her next. That’s just a brilliant mind f@ck.
Thank you for making the effort, it was certainly worth the wait.
Such detailed praise is always welcome, and I will say that some of the things you found most enjoyable were entirely Celestin's doing. It's always interesting to see what he provides, and with few exceptions, I usually let Celestin have a lot of leeway in the comic itself.
Glad to hear you enjoyed it. I hope plenty others felt the same.
I've been trying to collect my thoughts on this comic for the last few days only to log back on and see that qq2 pretty much already summed it up for me. Very little I think I can add to his praises. Personally I really loved the forced lingerie aspects of the story but I really hope we get more of the schoolgirl uniforms in part 4 or just latex/fetish aesthetics. They do look "scrumptious". Lance destroying Emily's asshole was worth the wait. We're going to Myanmar! The heart of darkness that all the other comics have been building to. Cel and Naj, I hope you both go all out on this one.
I figured I'd leave a list of some of my favorite Instagram images. Some of them are for the authentic, lingerie set, or I just like the model or photographer.
And if Celestine or other artist take inspiration from them that's cool or you can just ignore me.
Because I can never find the right location in the forum to leave praise without the risk of spoiling the story for other readers, hope this is all right.
It took me a few reads to put my finger on it but I think it’s the way you depict the power dynamic and Vicky’s ever deepening sense of her loss of it.
The scene in the cafeteria leading to the night with the other inmates and subsequently the other guards was a good starter.
I found the telephone scene after however truly inspired. Handing her back her purse and using that as a vehicle for her to be forced to wear humiliating clothes sets that scene perfectly.
The two dynamics occurring simultaneously after that though are my favorite of the comic:
- Emily repeatedly calling him Master, implicitly conveying just how far along her training has progressed.
- Ladonna forcing Vicky to admit that seeing Emily being manhandle turned her on, denying Vicky even the privacy of her darkest thoughts and emotions.
Both are excellent by themselves but the way the two are integrated makes this my favorite scene. Odd given how low on fetish it is compared to the next one but it is.
That’s not to say that the next one isn’t also great, IMHO at least.
First forcing Vicky to witness just how badly she’s failed Brenda and the other girls whilst experiencing it herself. Then, using the up of being “rescued” as a setup for such a dramatic fall. It really appealed to both my fetish for latex and powerplay. (I think technically not one scene but it felt like a whole to me)
Finally, the way she extricates herself and takes the plane is also a cool. By not being whisked away but instead giving her some degree of degree of initiative she becomes complacent in what ever happens to her next. That’s just a brilliant mind f@ck.
Thank you for making the effort, it was certainly worth the wait.[/quote]
I echo QQ2's thoughts here. I really liked how Vicky realizes how screwed she is and how she resigns herself to her fate. My favorite part is the bikini, total humiliation.
I hope you and Celestine double down on the fetish attire for the grand finally of GX. I really like this series and It's a tied with ATOCS as my favorite series on DOF but I think getting frivolous with the attire will put it over the edge for best. I'm sure part 4 is a long way off though hopefully only 6 months like between 1 and 2 and not 1 year like between 2 and 3.
Thank you for your time. Can't wait to see your next comic.
