BREAKING NEWS! DARK VENGEANCE IV by FERNANDO is here!
- Demosthenes
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I will say this for Chastity: I love her character design. Both her body and the way she is dressed at the start of her bit of the comic.
- lesale
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[quote="Excel"]Should have stuck with Brooke and Holly. The whole Chastity story is boring. Waited years for the sequel, disappointing.[/quote]
pretty much the same for me and the ending point towards continuing this story with her sister
dark vengeance to me is about Brooke and Holly, i have no interest in these side stories
pretty much the same for me and the ending point towards continuing this story with her sister
dark vengeance to me is about Brooke and Holly, i have no interest in these side stories
- Demosthenes
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I don't necessarily agree that no new characters should be introduced or no side-plots explored.
But I do believe that "Dark Vengeance" should primarily focus on Brooke and Holly.
But I do believe that "Dark Vengeance" should primarily focus on Brooke and Holly.
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Demosthenes, you can introduce some new character (Woman), but as long as it is a supporting character to the story being told, never, never overlap to Brooke and Holly and create another parallel story, with the consequent loss of interest.
In addition to waiting so many years to see what is going to turn this saga unfortunately.
In addition to waiting so many years to see what is going to turn this saga unfortunately.
- Thon
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This is pretty much the standard issue with Fernando comics. Fernano is arguably the best Dof artist when i comes to drawing sexy girls and hot outfits, but the stories are far from that level. It's mostly sexy scenes stacked up on each other with some minor cohesion. There's certainly nothing there to egg on the mind. Pretty much your standard porno scripts.
I'd love to see a collaboration between one of the best, probably the best, script writer at Dof, Triona, paired with the art of Fernando. That would make an explosive combo.
I'd love to see a collaboration between one of the best, probably the best, script writer at Dof, Triona, paired with the art of Fernando. That would make an explosive combo.
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I do not agree with you Thon.
Fernando's stories I do like, but at one point in history, Fernando loses himself by doing things he should not do, taking very winding paths instead of going the straight way, I mean without complicating himself in doing more things Which should, I explain:
In the Dark Vengeance saga are very well the first three parts, but this last part has lost interest in bringing new characters that eclipse Brooke and Holly. I could have put those new characters as support characters, not as a story parallel to the main one.
Can you imagine what this last part (53 pages) would have been, with just Brooke and Holly?
The first part of Total Control I love, of the best that has done Fernando, but already the second part low enough the level to introduce new characters that eclipse to the Kate (the only thing that deserves to be commented the scenes of Katelyn and Katy Perry).
And the third part the worst that Fernando has done to date, the only salvable that only appears Katelyn, but the worst is that there is only one stage (the Hotel room), and that only fucks Katelyn, Mr.Weiss.
The Cheerleaders saga I love all parts except the end of the eighth part when the new Cheerleaders appear, and the last part for the same, apart from the disappearance of Jessica.
Too many Cheerleaders that overshadow Anna, Dawn. Chris and Lorena.
The Twins saga more of the same.
The first four parts I loved, paying attention to Mrs.Bauer and the twins Sara and Raquel.
But the fifth and sixth parts are a chaos, a real nonsense, with the paralyzing stories of Clara and her brother, incest between them, losing all the interest that the first four parts had when it focused only on Mrs. Bauer, Sara and Raquel.
By this I mean that if Fernando reaches a point where he is running out of ideas, it is best to do one last exceptional, wonderful part, that we all remember, to continue stretching a story, making more comics, just for him I make more comics.
And so, by the way, you can make a new story, which for many years did not make a new story, I think the last one is Total Control and that's been four to five years.
Fernando's stories I do like, but at one point in history, Fernando loses himself by doing things he should not do, taking very winding paths instead of going the straight way, I mean without complicating himself in doing more things Which should, I explain:
In the Dark Vengeance saga are very well the first three parts, but this last part has lost interest in bringing new characters that eclipse Brooke and Holly. I could have put those new characters as support characters, not as a story parallel to the main one.
Can you imagine what this last part (53 pages) would have been, with just Brooke and Holly?
The first part of Total Control I love, of the best that has done Fernando, but already the second part low enough the level to introduce new characters that eclipse to the Kate (the only thing that deserves to be commented the scenes of Katelyn and Katy Perry).
And the third part the worst that Fernando has done to date, the only salvable that only appears Katelyn, but the worst is that there is only one stage (the Hotel room), and that only fucks Katelyn, Mr.Weiss.
The Cheerleaders saga I love all parts except the end of the eighth part when the new Cheerleaders appear, and the last part for the same, apart from the disappearance of Jessica.
Too many Cheerleaders that overshadow Anna, Dawn. Chris and Lorena.
The Twins saga more of the same.
The first four parts I loved, paying attention to Mrs.Bauer and the twins Sara and Raquel.
But the fifth and sixth parts are a chaos, a real nonsense, with the paralyzing stories of Clara and her brother, incest between them, losing all the interest that the first four parts had when it focused only on Mrs. Bauer, Sara and Raquel.
By this I mean that if Fernando reaches a point where he is running out of ideas, it is best to do one last exceptional, wonderful part, that we all remember, to continue stretching a story, making more comics, just for him I make more comics.
And so, by the way, you can make a new story, which for many years did not make a new story, I think the last one is Total Control and that's been four to five years.
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I completely agree colacao. Especially about cheerleaders but i am past caring about him after such a long time without any new comics or even posts. To me that shows lake of respect for his fans.
- Rud3b0y
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I kinda agree with colacao. All except cheerleaders. I felt cheerleaders was getting stale and the introduction of other new cheerleaders was ace. Shame we never got an extended scene of the girls in the truck and how they got south of the border. But the scene with Alice nd summer was by far the best fernando had done. The whole set up of cheerleaders 8 and 9 was amazing and shows fernando can add new characters and take the story in a different direction. My only criticism is the ending of cheerleaders 9.
That said I'm only an observer, and as such my opinion is we were all spoilt. He is still the best artist by far but he set an incredibly high bar. Not all can maintain that, like John carpenter, a God in the 80's, turning out classics, but the 90's come and the guy is spent. I'm not saying fernando is spent just probably needs a new idea, a new story, perhaps he may surprise us with his next comic. Keeping long sagas going is difficult. Perhaps thats why he took a break. He did say initially DV4 was not coming along and that's why he did TC3 first. He needed time. I do belive that there is lots if people out there with great ideas. When he was active on his forum it seemed he liked shooting the breeze to see what worked. I hope he is able to do that again.
Until then I'm still a fan, as he is the only game in town, but a new ip might be needed. I wonder if the last comic Would have been received better if the story with chastity was a new ip.......one to ponder.
That said I'm only an observer, and as such my opinion is we were all spoilt. He is still the best artist by far but he set an incredibly high bar. Not all can maintain that, like John carpenter, a God in the 80's, turning out classics, but the 90's come and the guy is spent. I'm not saying fernando is spent just probably needs a new idea, a new story, perhaps he may surprise us with his next comic. Keeping long sagas going is difficult. Perhaps thats why he took a break. He did say initially DV4 was not coming along and that's why he did TC3 first. He needed time. I do belive that there is lots if people out there with great ideas. When he was active on his forum it seemed he liked shooting the breeze to see what worked. I hope he is able to do that again.
Until then I'm still a fan, as he is the only game in town, but a new ip might be needed. I wonder if the last comic Would have been received better if the story with chastity was a new ip.......one to ponder.
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[quote="Demosthenes"]I think some people are being a bit harsh in their appraisal.
I liked it fine, though I do agree with the criticism that I would have preferred a bit more of Brooke and Holly and a bit less of the flashback.[/quote]
True. But we have all come to like Brooke and Holly so mush. They are a bit like sisters, but also trained and on the verge of becoming more lesbian.
It is interesting because it is clear that they are not gay lesbians, but are slowly transformed into it.
I just wish stories had focused more on them, their gradual acceptance of being sex toys and a couple of overthrows.
I've missed watching Petplay in Fernando Comics since Twins now 1, where the doubts are being given buttplugs me dhaler, headwear and put in collars and strings and presented as two puddles / ponies.
I wish Brooke and Holly got the same treatment, where they should again eat dog food of dishes and get dressed in petplay suits and going through the hard brainwashing of the mafia to become their domestic pets.
Perhaps their father could also be made a dog and forced to make a 'mating time' with both of them.
Just an idea, but wishing there was a little more focus on Brooke and Holly.
Holds a lot of them.
Otherwise a nice comic
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I liked it fine, though I do agree with the criticism that I would have preferred a bit more of Brooke and Holly and a bit less of the flashback.[/quote]
True. But we have all come to like Brooke and Holly so mush. They are a bit like sisters, but also trained and on the verge of becoming more lesbian.
It is interesting because it is clear that they are not gay lesbians, but are slowly transformed into it.
I just wish stories had focused more on them, their gradual acceptance of being sex toys and a couple of overthrows.
I've missed watching Petplay in Fernando Comics since Twins now 1, where the doubts are being given buttplugs me dhaler, headwear and put in collars and strings and presented as two puddles / ponies.
I wish Brooke and Holly got the same treatment, where they should again eat dog food of dishes and get dressed in petplay suits and going through the hard brainwashing of the mafia to become their domestic pets.
Perhaps their father could also be made a dog and forced to make a 'mating time' with both of them.
Just an idea, but wishing there was a little more focus on Brooke and Holly.
Holds a lot of them.
Otherwise a nice comic
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[quote="Excel"]Should have stuck with Brooke and Holly. The whole Chastity story is boring. Waited years for the sequel, disappointing.[/quote]
True. But we have all come to like Brooke and Holly so mush. They are a bit like sisters, but also trained and on the verge of becoming more lesbian.
It is interesting because it is clear that they are not gay lesbians, but are slowly transformed into it.
I just wish stories had focused more on them, their gradual acceptance of being sex toys and a couple of overthrows.
I've missed watching Petplay in Fernando Comics since Twins now 1, where the doubts are being given buttplugs me dhaler, headwear and put in collars and strings and presented as two puddles / ponies.
I wish Brooke and Holly got the same treatment, where they should again eat dog food of dishes and get dressed in petplay suits and going through the hard brainwashing of the mafia to become their domestic pets.
Perhaps their father could also be made a dog and forced to make a 'mating time' with both of them.
Just an idea, but wishing there was a little more focus on Brooke and Holly.
Holds a lot of them.
Otherwise a nice comic
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True. But we have all come to like Brooke and Holly so mush. They are a bit like sisters, but also trained and on the verge of becoming more lesbian.
It is interesting because it is clear that they are not gay lesbians, but are slowly transformed into it.
I just wish stories had focused more on them, their gradual acceptance of being sex toys and a couple of overthrows.
I've missed watching Petplay in Fernando Comics since Twins now 1, where the doubts are being given buttplugs me dhaler, headwear and put in collars and strings and presented as two puddles / ponies.
I wish Brooke and Holly got the same treatment, where they should again eat dog food of dishes and get dressed in petplay suits and going through the hard brainwashing of the mafia to become their domestic pets.
Perhaps their father could also be made a dog and forced to make a 'mating time' with both of them.
Just an idea, but wishing there was a little more focus on Brooke and Holly.
Holds a lot of them.
Otherwise a nice comic
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