BACKYARD GARDEN by KITTYHAND is here!!

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Poll: Please RATE THIS COMIC and share your thoughts with us. Thanks!

5 STAR *****
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77%
4 STAR ****
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3 STAR ***
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2 STAR **
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8%
1 STAR *
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Total votes: 13

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Bego
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BACKYARD GARDEN by KITTYHAND is here!!

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THINGS GET WET AND WILD AT THE DOUGLAS MANSION WHEN THE GROUNDSKEEPER CATCHES THE GOLD DIGGING WIDOW SECRETLY SELLING OFF THE ESTATE!

IT’S AMAZING WHAT A LITTLE KNOWLEDGE WILL BUY. CHRISTINA DOUGLAS’ BAD BEHAVIOR WILL BE PUNISHED THROUGH BRUTAL, BONDAGE SLAVERY!


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You can find the comic at:
http://www.dofantasy.com/english/USAFC4 ... arden1.htm

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Sarenaph
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Really superb story, with lots of themes I’m a fan off!

The actual dialogue could do with an update though, some fairly easy fixes and a few rewrites to make it sound more natural to an English speaker. I’m happy to help with any of that if you would like.
surrenderdorathy
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Post by surrenderdorathy »

Damn if KH can't draw the female form.
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KittyhandStudio
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Post by KittyhandStudio »

thank you for your approval of our work. as non-native English speakers, we knew the dialog we have written may look wired to those who born speaking English, the reason we are doing it ourselves is because since the story of our comics getting more and more complicated, the greater chance for the third party dialog writer misunderstood the concept of the story due to lack of communication and language barrier. we write dialog by ourselves now, we hired a native English speaker who used to teach English in school to correct the line, but the problem is that person has no interesting on BDSM comics at all. that alone made our dialog lacking the vibe of sexiness BDSM theme. our goal is to make top-notch BDSM comics, in order to get there, we will need your suggestions and feedbacks. you can email to kittyhandstudio@gmail.com to help us improve our works.
surrenderdorathy
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Post by surrenderdorathy »

I just want to say you guys are doing incredible work, keep it up.
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