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ponygirlrider3
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That's okay it was still good. Please don't kill off any of the girls
Damian264
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ponygirlrider3 wrote:Your latest Breeders comic was good, but it didn't quite have the payoff i was expecting. The second part won't be far behind will it?
Agreed Ponygirlrider. Good stuff - looking forward to a spiffing good part 2 ??

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ponygirlrider3
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I'm also a little sad that the baby from the last comic was killed off.
ponygirlrider3
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excited for ghosthouse , but more excited for the next breeders
darkfist
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ponygirlrider3 wrote:excited for ghosthouse , but more excited for the next breeders
Wish I could say the same. I was pretty excited for Breeders 2, but after reading I was left scratching my head. My favorite parts of the original were seeing the two girls put through their paces over the span of a year or close to it. I wish Slasher had saved the birthing scene until the sequel so we could have seen all the things she described were done to her while she was pregnant. It didn't need to add a ton of pages to the story but a few panels detailing her ordeal over time would have been nice, then ending the comic with her saying it was her time to do her duty. That's just my opinion.

My other favorite part of the original was Roscoe having fun with his new pet. I was hoping to see a few more panels detailing the evolution of this "relationship" maybe the girl getting kinda used to her new role, but we only got to see Roscoe and the new black girl and only a glimpse of his original pet. I felt like I'd already seen most of the events of the original repeated on the sequel. I didn't agree with just getting rid of Robert Elee! I was hoping to see the girl betrayed by her motherly instincts and come to love her baby while still continuing to fulfill her duties to the family.

Maybe with the addition of the three new girls, they would give the original mother to Roscoe as his other pet! I dunno, I was kinda frustrated with the way the story went, so much potential!
ponygirlrider3
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darkfist wrote:
ponygirlrider3 wrote:excited for ghosthouse , but more excited for the next breeders
Wish I could say the same. I was pretty excited for Breeders 2, but after reading I was left scratching my head. My favorite parts of the original were seeing the two girls put through their paces over the span of a year or close to it. I wish Slasher had saved the birthing scene until the sequel so we could have seen all the things she described were done to her while she was pregnant. It didn't need to add a ton of pages to the story but a few panels detailing her ordeal over time would have been nice, then ending the comic with her saying it was her time to do her duty. That's just my opinion.

My other favorite part of the original was Roscoe having fun with his new pet. I was hoping to see a few more panels detailing the evolution of this "relationship" maybe the girl getting kinda used to her new role, but we only got to see Roscoe and the new black girl and only a glimpse of his original pet. I felt like I'd already seen most of the events of the original repeated on the sequel. I didn't agree with just getting rid of Robert Elee! I was hoping to see the girl betrayed by her motherly instincts and come to love her baby while still continuing to fulfill her duties to the family.

Maybe with the addition of the three new girls, they would give the original mother to Roscoe as his other pet! I dunno, I was kinda frustrated with the way the story went, so much potential!
I also wish they didn't get rid of Robert Elee. But who knows I'm willing to wait till the next part.
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Naj
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Besides the fact that it was established that the Breeders' previous attempts to create descendants had failed (so therefore was mentioned as being a likely outcome), Robert Elee didn't have a particularly good chance of survival, anyway. The main problem with pornography in general, and this genre specifically, is the moment you start adding children, you run the very serious risk of it bleeding into (or being perceived as) child pornography, which is a big, big, big no no.

Could it have been handled so little Robert Elee survived? I suppose, but I think it'd just be safer to not include children at all. I think there's a very good reason neither Fernando's Confiscated Twins or Erenisch's stories have children present, even though logically for any society (no matter how perverted), children should be present. It just starts raising a lot of red flags, and we already have enough trouble with the material as it stands. Just my 2 cents.
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fernandofan
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I hadn't thought of that, Naj. Good point.
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I can understand that adding children to comics does run the risk of sending up tons of red flags. In fact, I was expecting the first comic to end before she even gave birth. I did however enjoy the first comic more than this one. I loved all the abuse they got and I loved how he did a "nine months later" thing. To me (as sick and twisted as I am) really enjoyed that. It was the unknown, knowing that the girls have been in captivity for almost a year, knowing that they suffered months of non stop abuse in some cabin out in the middle of nowhere, knowing that there are probably people searching for the. Yes, I know, im a horrible person :D

Also, I didn't mind him getting rid of the baby but I was disappointed we didnt really see any more of the girls from the original comic. I was really hoping we would have seen more of the pet but she was only in a few scenes and that was it. Im also hoping the other girl doesnt get away
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fernandofan
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Yeah, the ending of the first Breeders was pretty epic. Slasher has always pushed the envelope when it comes to depravity. I must say that I found the second Breeders to be a bit tame and less in the spirit that the first one set. Maybe he could have a "mass birthing" in the third one. Well, whatever he puts out, it's always a fun ride.
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