TARA ENSLAVED by Ted Owen **POSTED**

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ernestgreene
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Ted, if you happen to be reading this, I do have a question. What happened to the Indian slavegirl bound under the floor drain. She started the story, was brought to the party for punishment and then we never saw her again in the comic, unless I missed something. Wouldn't mind seeing that enlarged clit in action, being also a fan of extracted orgasms. Thanks.
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Dear ernestgreene: I wanted to express the idea that these men have been t@rturing lots of girls for a long time, so I added an Indian girl to spice things up a little. If possible, I will create a story for her in the future.
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- Well, some time people get sick of white girl and wanna taste some thing new, like an indian girl with suntan skin. You know what i mean, right?
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Hi Ted. Thanks for the quick response. I'll look forward to that comic.
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I also thought there was a bit too much going on. For 50 pages I prefer the comic to focus on one or two girls, such as the last one. It becomes hard to really feel the story when there are 5 girls to think about. I would be very happy if the next comic is a continuation of The Basement.
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Five girls? No problem.
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[quote="cigar4411"]I also thought there was a bit too much going on. For 50 pages I prefer the comic to focus on one or two girls, such as the last one. It becomes hard to really feel the story when there are 5 girls to think about. I would be very happy if the next comic is a continuation of The Basement.[/quote]

have to agree with this
really like when its only 1-2 girls instead of a group
would love a sequel to the basement too
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I agree that a work needs to focus on one or two central characters for dramatic purposes, but others can certainly appear as background players without detracting from the main story line. In this context, their purpose is likely to be eye-candy, but there's nothing wrong with that.
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I would also add that Tara Enslaved is, to some degree, a sequel to The Basement, as the two main characters from the first comic are strongly featured in the second. I think this opens up the story to a wider range of possibilities as we see.
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Thank you all once again for the generous and valuable feedback on this project. Bego sent me an email, which summed up what has been discussed here, and I will definitely keep them in mind to improve the next project. Your support and suggestions means a lot to me. Thank you all very much!
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